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Anonymous
March 4th, 2005, 01:01 AM
Having a rough night, so I wrote this....

Blind

Can’t you see?
What are you?
What else can you be?
Blind.

Everyday I suffer,
You’d never believe,
I’m a cutter,
Blind.

You act so tough,
It’s hard to believe,
You’d hurt from a little cut,
Blind.

I’d never show you,
You pushed me too far,
Me? I'm surprised too,
Blind.

This shit comes in piles,
The pressure I’m under,
I wear a fake smile,
Blind.

You are not alone,
Many can only wonder,
Why I’m never on the phone,
Blind.

Put two and two together,
Or maybe you’ll have a chance,
To lose me forever,
Blind.




-Ekia

Anonymous
June 16th, 2005, 11:46 PM
Put two and two together,
Or maybe you’ll have a chance,
To lose me forever,
Blind.

I don't mean to brag, but I just love that last stanza, I think it's the best few lines I have ever written in anything.

Whisper
June 17th, 2005, 01:50 AM
Its very good man! :D

Oath
June 24th, 2005, 09:25 PM
Nice.