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The Joker
August 5th, 2009, 03:17 AM
I wrote this in 30 minutes, so sorry if it sucks. It's about cutting.

When things look bleak
And you're feelin' weak
Hold on

When you can't take any more
You feel like fallin' to the floor
Hold on

Because when the blade enters
The pain isn't gone
When the blade enters
The pain is strong

If you feel like you're done
And the only conversation is none
Hold on

If you have a bad grade, friend or family
And you're thinking "Why me?"
Hold on

Because when the blade enters
You only get deeper
When the blade enters
Things only look meaker

If you feel depressed
As if life is a big mess
Hold on

If you feel insanity
It's as worse as it coule be
Then hold on

Hold on for me
Hold on for you
Hold on for all of us
If you feel bad
Don't be mad
Someone cares (we care)

Because if the blade doesn't enter
You feel great
The blade won't enter
No more hate
The blade can't enter
Because you are tough
The blade is gone
You can deal with the rough

OnlyByTheNight.
August 5th, 2009, 06:56 AM
Thats really good Matt. :D

Zazu
August 5th, 2009, 08:36 AM
*hugs* That's good Matt

TigerLily
August 5th, 2009, 08:51 AM
I love it, Matt
:hug:

nick
August 5th, 2009, 12:53 PM
Great poem Matt, hold on indeed

If you feel bad
Don't be mad
Someone cares

I can't give you more rep atm, system wont allow, otherwise I would. <3

Sunshine Girl
August 5th, 2009, 03:03 PM
woah i really like this :)
+reppp