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BuryYourFlame
July 27th, 2009, 07:18 AM
Don't leave me here,
all alone once again,
crying on the stairs,
everything rushing back in,
all the pain not yet healed.

Don't leave me here,
the point between giving up,
and what I need,
one little push is all it takes,
but I'm stuck in this void.

Don't leave me here,
with a new meaning to,
the dead of night,
where nothing is sound,
and nothing is sight.

Don't leave me here,
the gap not worth closing,
or so it seems,
the indecision,
coming to the point of madness.

I would rather be flying,
than be waiting here,
flying on the cotton clouds,
with wings of extrvagant white,
carrying me to safety.

Or down below,
beneath the Earth,
where agony ensures,
there is no escape,
save you.

So tear me down,
or lift me up,
just make a choice,
take me anywhere,
but don't leave me here.

Holding On*
July 27th, 2009, 07:20 AM
I love this!! :)

PoisonedRazorBlades
July 27th, 2009, 07:23 AM
It's great Declan XD Love it.

BuryYourFlame
July 27th, 2009, 07:25 AM
Thanks guys :)

another one coming up in a few min/hour or so...idk...but...sometime tonight probably...

maddiieee
July 27th, 2009, 12:56 PM
Wow, that's beautiful! You've got real talent for this! :D

nick
July 27th, 2009, 01:42 PM
I really like this one, good stuff

ErykaInspire.
July 28th, 2009, 08:03 PM
You're an amazing writer, hun. This poem really reaches out and grabs the reader<3

peaceloverugby
July 29th, 2009, 01:23 AM
last stanza = brilliance

nice to see you get all fucking creative when i'm not around to distract you lol

Sunshine Girl
July 29th, 2009, 02:11 AM
really great :)