some old stuff i wrote.

[ylllek nivyer]

4 words of sorrow:
lets just be friends.
I should have known it,
that it'd just happed again.

i should have never trusted,
i should have never let you in.
you should've known not to play with me
the ice my emotions skate on is thin.

i was oh so close to breaking,
but then i saw ur face.
now my heart struggles to beat,
to even keep one pace.

here, my hearts been shattered,
after breaking one more time.
the way i see it, killing,
may not be such a crime.

now please, dont worry,
your not my target,
it's just myself, me.
now it's time to forget.

forget about you,
forget about life.
now its time to start over,
and come down with the knife.

now please, dont blame yourself,
because it was all my fault.
we cant control our feelings
now im the slug,and ur the salt.

i just want to be happy,
like i used to be,
before dad screamed
before chloe left.

now it's time to close my eyes
and take my final breath.

[ErykaInspire.]

wow... this has alot of emotion.
You're an amazing writer, and it all flows nicely.
<3

[Atonement]

That was very beautiful and it was fluid. I enjoyed it and felt it.