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SlightlySane
July 18th, 2009, 12:20 AM
I look near you…
I look around you…
I look past you…
I’m looking for you…

You are standing right there
We are practically touching
But I can’t see you there
Staring me right in the face

Why don’t I notice you
I can feel your breath
Why won’t I talk to you
I can hear your voice

You are right there waiting for me as I look beyond
I’m still searching for that special someone
And I know it’s you
Standing there waiting for me to find you

Just one hint is all I need
Even though I know right where you’ll be
Standing there in front of me
I just wish I could see…

Brilliance
July 18th, 2009, 06:00 AM
Geez that's good. Well done.

SlightlySane
July 18th, 2009, 11:17 PM
thanks I appreciate it

ErykaInspire.
August 19th, 2009, 07:12 PM
Love is blind

SlightlySane
August 21st, 2009, 11:34 PM
WOW, that is exactly what I was looking for. You are amazing it's like you can understand everything about my poems I can't.

Sunshine Girl
August 21st, 2009, 11:43 PM
*chills* that was incredible.

Yesterdays Hero
August 23rd, 2009, 02:07 AM
That is very, very good.

ErykaInspire.
August 23rd, 2009, 08:57 AM
WOW, that is exactly what I was looking for. You are amazing it's like you can understand everything about my poems I can't.

To me, poetry is more of sending/receiving a message.. not about the words in general, but the poem as a whole.
Your poetry makes perfect sense in my eyes.

SlightlySane
August 23rd, 2009, 06:57 PM
To me, poetry is more of sending/receiving a message.. not about the words in general, but the poem as a whole.
Your poetry makes perfect sense in my eyes.

I could only wish I knew people like you. The kind that don't think it's weird what I write.

ErykaInspire.
August 23rd, 2009, 07:00 PM
People think it's weird that I write, too.
They consider me as the social outcast with too many friends. xD
I know that doesn't make entire sense, but to me it does.

Writing isn't just a hobby, it's a passion. People need to realize that.