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Triceratops
July 15th, 2009, 06:42 PM
So this poem's about the meaning and my own perception of heaven, one of the only "happy" pieces that I have wrote. I like to think of it as short but sweet.
My grandparents want this piece hanging up above their fireplace, that's so freaking sweet. :D


Drifting Amongst Clouds

Soaring high upon the Earth's sky
Radiance shimmers within
Immense powers collide with beauty
Drifting amongst the clouds of heaven

Chimes of gold rupture the fears amongst

Breezes caressing supple souls
Gleaming wonders and purity
Presenses of the phenomenon
Drifting amonst the clouds of heaven

Everlasting pulchritudity

Poise and vibrance strike unity
Sheer essences luster
Soothing melodies harmonise the milieu
Drifting amongst the clouds of heaven

Bougainvillea
July 15th, 2009, 07:02 PM
I love it, Marcie!
You're great. :)