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MysticalBurrito
July 6th, 2009, 06:26 PM
Feeling Reality


I’m feeling it now
I’m not numb anymore
I know how it hurts now

I thought it would feel differently
But its tearing me apart
Inside, outside

I thought this would be different
Instead it feels like someone is killing me slowly

Reaching for something that isn’t there
Breathing air that isn’t there

Gasping for air that is too thick to breath
Pain and blindness
Blackness dragging me to it’s shelter
Refusing to go there
Walk away don’t look back

Pain that isn’t going away
Darkness pulling me back
At least there I’m secure
Not afraid to be in anymore pain than I already am in

Walk away don’t look back
Scared looks
Gasping for air that’s too thick to breath
Reaching for something that isn’t there
Breathing air that isn’t there
Wishing for something more
Darkness pulling me back
Don’t look away
I’m not coming back
To this day I promise you that
There’s no light at the end of this tunnel!

Someone save me
I’m drowning on dry land
Sun beating down..
Someone save me please
I can’t see the light at the end of this tunnel!

ThUnDeR
July 6th, 2009, 06:30 PM
verry good

LiGHT
July 6th, 2009, 06:35 PM
=[ This is a really good poem and I understood it and it meant something to me..

MysticalBurrito
July 6th, 2009, 06:43 PM
Wow two comments already XD
Thank you :)

dead
July 6th, 2009, 06:45 PM
You have all my respect.

MysticalBurrito
July 7th, 2009, 07:56 AM
:rolleyes: Thankshu