Love, Don't Forget (poem)

[Flutterfly]

Press the pen to the paper and what do you get?
The words that I've written and please don't forget.
I love you with me heart and not just my words.
I promise I'll keep going 'til the goal has been met.

Love trickles from the hearts of those who dare to be
amazed by the meaning of life and the things that we share,
for the love and for the care, for everything that is and is not fair.

Life opens my eyes to the pain that has been brought.
You've opened my eyes to the love that I've sought.

[LiGHT]

Verrrry good poem. You said you did not know if the 2nd part flowed but it really did.
I liked it.

[Antares]

I like it :D

Very ncie and deep

[Zazu]

Me likes :)

[Project Delta]

Who is it about? *grins*

[BlackenedSilver]

Aww! That so nice :)
Amazing poem Eli! :wub:

[Project Delta]

I wish i could write poems, i'd do onne for you... but i cant

[NightFighter]

That was really good! :)
Yeah, i wish i could write poems too but i just suck and the attempts quite embarrassing xD