Addicted [song] (Recording in thread... 0.o)

[Underground_Network]

Pessimistic and sadistic,
You are constantly casuistic,
And I know that you're resisting
When you say your life's nonfiction.

But if a book had just been written
And it talked about conniption,
You would be in the description,
Cause your rage is my addiction.

And I'm allergic to the friction caused
By you and your subscription
To malevolent depictions
Of me being afflicted and...

If a book had just been written
And it talked about conniption,
You would be in the description,
Cause your rage is my addiction.

Oh you claim I'm voyeuristic
'Cos I always claim I missed it,
But according to your physics,
What you've said is contradictin' (lyric in recording is 'ain't scientific,' I may adjust it later)

And (might be oh in the recording) no matter how prolific
The words I use, my diction,
You always claim its fiction,
Because I am ridiculous, afflicted, and submissive.

But if a book had just been written
And it talked about conniption
You would be in the description
Cause your rage is my addiction!

Oh you say I'm just a clipping
Of a larger piece unwritten,
Currently in misdirection,
I am fatally infected.

But how am I too cryptic
When you're always like a mystic,
Hiding altruistically
Because the pain's not yet inflicted.

But if a book had just been written
And it talked about conniption
You would be in the description
Cause your rage is my addiction!

Yeah your rage is my addiction,
And no matter how its written
I will always be depicted
As the hero and the villain.

[LiGHT]

Um all I can think of is something like addicted or addiction. Sorry

[Underground_Network]

Wow, I'm trying to record this, because if I can do it successfully, I'll post the recording on here, but I keep having to adjust the lyrics to make things work lol...

And 'Addicted' isn't a bad idea, but I'm still going to see if anyone else has any ideas.

[Underground_Network]

My throat is messed up, my mic is messed up (its all static-y), and I messed up at least one line... But I'm too lazy to record this again (I've tried recording it like six times now...)

The song itself is like 90 something seconds long, though the recording goes on for 121 seconds and has some static toward the end for some reason.

But yesh... Here are be me singing (with an f-ed up voice though... Though my voice isn't that affected, I couldn't try and sing this the way I truly would have liked it to sound because my throat REALLY hurts right now).

[BlackenedSilver]

I would say addicted too. Good title. :)
Awesome song. I like the tune and your singing. :P

[LiGHT]

:o I am honored you used my title.
The song is really good, its a little static and it needs some beat or something haha but its good.

[Underground_Network]

I don't have Garage Band, though I'm looking to get it in the near future (though I'm not so sure its compatible with my computer)... And since I don't play any instruments at the moment, its not so easy to put music into the recording.

[LiGHT]

Oh.. what kind of computer do you have? I have garage band and If you want i might be able to add music or something to it. I just have to figure out how to use ti first =\

[Underground_Network]

Haha, well, from what I hear, you need a Mac to use Garage Band, and I have a PC... But idk.

Supposedly you can get Garage Band on a PC too, but I hear its better on Mac's or something. 0.o The only friend I have that has garage band has a Mac, so idk.

[LiGHT]

I have a mac and I have heard that on pc you can use it. Ill try to find a link.
and the closest thing to it for pc is super dooper music looper xD.

[Origami]

Sorry but I'm the brutal C&C guy.
It's good, no lie.
But wtf? Sounds like a mix of Dr.Seuss and a poetry reading.
A: How, you, sang, it, got, annoying, after, a, while. Maybe it was my headphones? o.O Didn't sound right.
B: You paused after each stanza, poetry that's common, but a lot of songs continue on. ):
C: Quiet + Low volume static = I have trouble hearing. xD

Anyway epic regardless Adam, I liked it. :)

[Underground_Network]

Yeah, I fucked up the recording. That and my throat was killing me while I did that...

But this was more of a contemporary genre of music (compared to the first 'stanza' in Chronic Future's song Rocket Science, though it has a different sound to it of course).

And yeah, again, I didn't do it perfectly. It could be done better... But I don't really care lol. I'm not too fond of my own voice. I prefer writing lyrics, not singing. ;)

[Perseus]

Those are very good lyrics. You are very creative. :)
And Addicition is a good title.