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The Harlequin
July 2nd, 2009, 05:20 AM
Right, so I have posted two completely different poems on here, one of which attracted a few comments etc. and the other which didn't. One of these poems had a very dark, grim feel to it, the other was inspired by a feeling of love.

Now it could just be that my other one was crap, in which case I apologise but I want to get feedback on my stuff, my question is: what kinda poety are you most likely to read and comment on? Is it going to be light or dark?

If you want to see my poetry for yourself they are called:
~ Hating You, Sir (dark)
~ SunMan (light)