Intergrated Assignment Version 1.0

[Waiting]

yeah so its long and stuff
feedback would be good
i know i dont post here ever
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So don't you know?
you're the one that i love,
I can't forget and
Can't you see?
I'll stay together with you,
so stay together with me

The first day of fall,
is the last day i'll kiss the sky
ive wasted more time dreaming then sleeping
more time dreaming then sleeping
Next year this time i'll be there
i'll dream of the past and wish i was there
enjoy enjoy every breath
like it will be the last of your life

so please look back
how hard is it anyway?
you have to make this easy,
make this easy, so try for me

So don't you know?
you're the one that i love,
i can't forget and
Can't you see?
i'll stay together with you so
stay together with...
so don't you know?
you're the one that i love,
i can't forget and
Can't you see?
i'll stay together with you so
stay together with me

Well cross off my heart and hope to die
i'll keep you here for all of my life
but you're loving but leaving,
loving but leaving,
am i something that you're missing?
"take it or leave it" were the words
you chose over mine remember
10.01 the night has been and gone
our memories will dissapear

So please come back
how hard is it anyway?
you have to make this easy
make this easy, please try for me

So don't you know?
you're the one that i love,
i can't forget and
Can't you see?
i'll stay together with you so
stay together with...

So don't you know?
So don't you know?
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
stay together with me.

[Lost_and_fallen]

Your writing's come on a long way since I last saw anything you wrote.
I like this, it's good - It's well structured and I like the way you've put alot of the things you want to say.

I particularly liked "but you're loving but leaving,
loving but leaving,
am i something that you're missing?
"take it or leave it" were the words
you chose over mine remember
10.01 the night has been and gone
our memories will dissapear"

It'd be good to see more from you soon :)

xx

[Waiting]

thanks hun,
well music gcse forces me to write
i quit along time ago after my thoughts were found - so yeah istopped writing, but music made me,

um influences think get cape wear cape fly