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MysticalBurrito
June 26th, 2009, 09:01 PM
The End Of This Pain

Red crimson mark
Left behind as a trail
Through the lines of her arms
Bleeding the rivers the flow down her cheeks as she cries

Your eyes tell me a thousand stories of heartbreak and misfortune he says
Let me lead you away from this pain
He grabs her hand
Leads her towards more pain and suffering…

Stepping through thistles, thorns and everything in-between
Slit wrists
Watching, hearing and seeing the deaths of loved ones

The thoughts race in her mind
He promised rest…
He promised peace
He promised the feeling of being loved…

Throw down
Beaten
Ashamed

Living disaster
Scars dried out rivers
Dried rivers that once flowed many tears

Where does the peace start she asks as the pain begins to be unbearable
After the world stop spinning and the stars stop shinning…

Sunshine Girl
June 27th, 2009, 01:08 AM
raw
emotion.

its great.
keep writting (:

MysticalBurrito
June 27th, 2009, 01:10 AM
Thankshu :)

MadManWithaBox
June 28th, 2009, 05:29 PM
that was brilliant, have you had anything published?

MysticalBurrito
June 28th, 2009, 06:13 PM
No but I'm considering it.
I don't have enough money to if it costs money