Rape

[ErykaInspire.]

[This isn't entirely finished... I just havn't had the nerve to finish it and it's been almost a year >.<]


A tear slipped from my eye
I told myself I wouldnt cry
and to think I once stood strong
that was before you did everything wrong

people thought we were meant to be
but nobody else could really see
that you tore me apart bit by bit
a piece of my heart just doesnt fit

you swore to me its not what you're after
but now im lost and have no laughter
I feel broken and used...
....I refused....

[millymollymandy]

oh please do (or try to) its so good

[TODAYisTHEday]

It is beautiful Paula.. I think I shed a tear..

[AllThatIsLeft]

Umm.. I'm Paula... She's Eryka.

and that a wonderful piece.
i hope you finish it, it has great potential.

[Aneklusmos]

Wow, thats really powerful, if you have the nerve, I'd love to see more

[TODAYisTHEday]

Umm.. I'm Paula... She's Eryka.

and that a wonderful piece.
i hope you finish it, it has great potential.
Oops yeah I know >.< I get confused with all this name changing :/

[MyNameIsJack]

This is great, You have to finish it

[Misty.]

its such a bful poem..plz do try to finish it :)

[ErykaInspire.]

There's a finished version in my blog.