Log in

View Full Version : Ramblings of The Insane


The Boy Genius
June 24th, 2009, 03:14 AM
Here is my first Poem. Its really weird. Any tips post below. Ps I am writing random stuff and some observations in there

Sitting on a bandana. Watching the mountains set. Slot Machines falling from the sky. Pigs flying from the ground. Vodka Stake and Blue Berries growing out of Pie. A griffin a griffin we all fall around. IV fluid and Emperor Nero having Shirt for tea. 281 Phalanges. 20 people and 1 veteran. Streets paved with gold. Superficial Tacs Smiling in a row. Idiotic men running on the sun. Mrs fun lying in the sun. Run like a gun. Gun like a run. Don’t use wax and get to warm then you will drown. Don’t go to high like the sky. Our heads so swelled I am surprised we fit through the door. Paused Peas. Meditating Mice. Dumping Drains. Expensive coats, made of blood. Black toes and red ears. Pulled in every direction. Fat little children winning for some thing else. Doves telling the Tacs what they want to hear. Pizza walking down the road.

gone
July 25th, 2009, 10:39 AM
wtf O_O its weird.. I like weird :)

2D
July 25th, 2009, 04:17 PM
This is such extreme weirdness and randomness that I actually love it!! I demand MOAR! :D

The Boy Genius
July 26th, 2009, 06:32 AM
well what you do is just write random stuff and then play it backward and use fables and felling eg. Tacs are Cats which are rich or powerful people and Doves are Priests and religious people

ErykaInspire.
July 26th, 2009, 07:49 AM
I don't understand this at all... lol

2D
July 26th, 2009, 05:00 PM
well what you do is just write random stuff and then play it backward and use fables and felling eg. Tacs are Cats which are rich or powerful people and Doves are Priests and religious people

Ummm....okay? haha No idea how to do that. :P This is like what modern art is but it's actually good. Like I really really like it. Is there a certain name for this kind of writing?