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MysticalBurrito
June 23rd, 2009, 01:46 AM
Oh the months shall pass
Oh the years shall pass
I will wonder what could have happen between us
Please
Remember me in your dreams tonight
Oh you forgetful soul

My mind wonders far and near
To the yonder
Beyond these scars
Beyond the pain I cant explain

Through the demise of this heart the despise of the world
The dark shadows follow me through this night
Kissing goodbye my dreams and hopes
Following the river of life wherever it leads me

Maybe it will lead me to you.
The one I’ve been searching for.
Or maybe it will lead me right past you..

Arrows shoot through the holes in my heart
Slowly killing me
Forcing me farther away then ever before
Killing me slowly and tenderly

This heart yours to hold

TheNamesDrew
June 25th, 2009, 01:55 AM
i like

MysticalBurrito
June 25th, 2009, 10:28 AM
:) Thank you Drew I wasn't expecting anyone to like it xD

Sunshine Girl
June 25th, 2009, 09:19 PM
i also like :]

TheNamesDrew
June 26th, 2009, 12:25 AM
You Are Very Welcome

millymollymandy
June 26th, 2009, 05:53 PM
this is really good

MysticalBurrito
June 26th, 2009, 05:56 PM
:) Thankshu

The Harlequin
June 29th, 2009, 06:27 AM
It's great, I find it really makes you think which is a very impressive effect to achieve.
Yup, you done good (:^,

nick
June 29th, 2009, 12:38 PM
Its good, it seems to come from the heart

MysticalBurrito
June 29th, 2009, 12:44 PM
:) Thank yous