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nick
June 4th, 2009, 12:20 PM
Must I be forced to live alone
abandoned on life's lonely shore?
This is my destiny? Perhaps,
though in all truth I hope for more.

Imagine if some day it seems
love, true love, has come to me.
Oh, then happiness I'll find,
very full my heart will be.

Every day I dream of love
yet still true love passes by.
One day I pray that love will come,
until then, alone, I sigh.

Zazu
June 4th, 2009, 12:48 PM
Nice rhyming structure Nick + well written as per usual, I like it :)

TigerLily
June 4th, 2009, 07:38 PM
Another beautiful poem Nick... noticing a pattern here?
You're a really great poet :)

nick
June 4th, 2009, 07:54 PM
Another beautiful poem Nick... noticing a pattern here?
You're a really great poet :)
Haha, thanks Rachel. Pattern in my poems or a pattern in this poem?

Glad you like it, not one of my best. I found this one very difficult. Its written to a pattern, certainly, therein was the difficulty. It conveys a simple message for all to see.

The Joker
June 6th, 2009, 03:34 PM
This is a very beautiful poem Nick.

TigerLily
June 6th, 2009, 06:39 PM
Haha, thanks Rachel. Pattern in my poems or a pattern in this poem?

Glad you like it, not one of my best. I found this one very difficult. Its written to a pattern, certainly, therein was the difficulty. It conveys a simple message for all to see.

I actually meant pattern as in all your poems all being really great and beautiful :)