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Sunshine Girl
May 31st, 2009, 02:09 PM
Misfortunate boy with shadows under his eyes
Please don’t collapse, we still need to compromise
For you will crumble without this cast
You owe me revenge.
This is not just a twisted game but the last

Through the window can you see that broken city?
Flames and chaos overwhelmed with pity.
Your task was simple and effortless
An order you could not miss
But love wrapped around your childish heart
And not even genocide could tear you two apart

Misfortunate boy with shadows under his eyes
Please don’t collapse, we still need to compromise
I know you’re torn and aching
But you need to escape or you’re here for the taking
This time my orders you will not fail
You and your lovely lady will prevail

In this broken city she needs you here
Together you will run without fear
If this cruel world realized this love
And not focus on power, you would rise above

Misfortunate boy with shadows under his eyes
You won’t collapse, there’s no need to compromise

(more to come. [:)

Underground_Network
May 31st, 2009, 02:14 PM
Mmm, melikes. :D

Sterling, I can't wait to see what else you end up writing. ;) You'll be a great writer. :hug3:

AllThatIsLeft
May 31st, 2009, 02:53 PM
oh that is excellent. me likeyy