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MysticalBurrito
May 30th, 2009, 08:22 PM
A girl sits in a corner

Not much older than me or you

Begging for her life

“please…” she sobs trying to controls the shakes of her body

Razors next to her

Blood on the bed

On the walls


She couldn’t take the pain inside anymore


She snapped

She knew she would

Still crying softly

She begs harder for her life

This wasn’t worth it

Death wasn’t for her

“please….” she begs

“Please…Stop it”

The pain the…..

“The bleeding! Make it STOP!”

She screams at the walls of the empty old house

No one was home to hear her screams

She starts getting tired and calm

Feeling a rush of peacefulness wash over her

She lays down in the tube and turns some music on

“stop the bleeding”

Peace falls over her like a blanket

She feels the water drain

Worried voices
“Is she alive?” Someone asks

“I don’t think so….”

Someone answers

Stuck in a empty space…

She wasn’t trying to die when she did that

She wanted to feel alive

“wait..”

They turn around to see her eyes open

Then close to peacefulness she wanted….

Zazu
May 31st, 2009, 12:26 PM
Good, and emotional, poem. I like it :)