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cutter13
February 17th, 2005, 09:44 PM
Hey guys... just recently I wrote a poem about my bf and i and how he has helped me seek the best out of the most horrible situation/scenario possible! and I just thought I would post it to get feed back and see what you guys think... here goes nothing!

Untitled Love
Her way of crying
Wasn't like any other
Her life was shattered
She was a cutter
It'd been like this for about three years
In school she was rejected
while at home she was neglected
It was a battle she'd never win
Every day cutting again
Never stopping never caring
Because the pain was so unbaring
She didn't see how bad she hurt
The people that did love her
Then one day you threatened me
That if I didn't come to see
That you're there and that you care
That we'd no longer be
So I stopped losing blood in fear of losing you
And now I see I love you! and you love me too

Anonymous
February 18th, 2005, 05:04 PM
That is a beautiful poem might I say and I'm glad that this poem ends well. I'm so glad to hear that your life as a cutter has ended. I wish you luck in your life ahead.

Ravenous
February 19th, 2005, 02:37 PM
That is a moving poem, you have talent

Waiting
February 19th, 2005, 06:15 PM
moving to creative writing

but it is a good poem -thumbs up-