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nick
May 28th, 2009, 12:30 PM
A simple conversation, gently probing,
a little correspondence, nothing more,
noting you agree on many issues,
thats how it begins.

Late night chats in private windows,
playful fun and innuendo, maybe racy,
explicit questions of a personal nature,
thats how it continues.

An exchange of photos, videos maybe,
a person in your thoughts throughout the day,
waiting for the hour, for the next contact,
thats how you fall.

Dare you tell them how you're really feeling,
plucking up the nerve, finding the words to say,
at last you find the courage, find the moment,
thats how you gamble.

Waiting anxiously for them to answer,
is your message welcomed or rebuffed,
all your hopes are hanging on this instant
thats how you discover.

Love, wonderful love,
you bring us so much pleasure, so much pain.
Love, wonderful love,
when will you melt my heart again?

Is there to be a happy outcome,
will the story end in sadness or in joy?
Have you now found a cyber partner,
thats the question.

Love, cruel love,
you bring us so much pleasure, so much pain.
Love, cruel love,
when will you break my heart again?

Music Lover
May 28th, 2009, 12:41 PM
O.o

Wow....

I like it :D

Underground_Network
May 28th, 2009, 12:46 PM
I liked it. ;)

Zazu
May 28th, 2009, 03:00 PM
Great as per usual dude :)

TigerLily
May 28th, 2009, 03:13 PM
I just keep loving your poems Nick!
Another great poem ^_^

The Joker
June 1st, 2009, 07:11 PM
This is a great poem Nick!

nick
June 2nd, 2009, 06:51 PM
This is a great poem Nick!
Very glad you liked it

Aneklusmos
June 2nd, 2009, 09:25 PM
Very good!! I like your poems a lot. Is this based of real life?

nick
June 3rd, 2009, 05:33 PM
Very good!! I like your poems a lot. Is this based of real life?
Pretty much, its a follow on from The visitor in the night (http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/showthread.php?t=45075) which had its basis in something of an emotional crisis for me a week or so ago

Silent
June 4th, 2009, 12:36 AM
Love it!