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MysticalBurrito
May 26th, 2009, 10:37 PM
A story poem I came up with enjoy

She sits here looking for a reason to live
She’s not loved
At least she doesn’t feel it

She sites here looking for a reason to live
Behind these eyes there is a tortured mind

She hopes to make it to 18 but 7 months seems so far away

Behind these eyes lies a imagination
That nobody she knows would imagine

Hoping to live to 18 seems so far away

Will the friendships she has end?

Why does 18 seem so far away

She doesn’t want to die

But why does death seem like such a escape?

She sites here holding her heart

Wishing for him to come

To take it away

But that only happens in fairytales

There never is a happy ending she thinks as she grabs her gun

Aiming it is so hard

Suicide love

The last thought she has before she pulls the trigger

Ending her life before 18

So young

So hopeless

So empty inside

He walks in one minute too late

The sobbing ceases to stop

He didn’t know what he had till she was gone…

Holding her lifeless body

Her eye open and look at him
Somehow in unspoken words

I love you

The words she longed to get out

Where out

In

Suicidal love

Holding her cold body into the night

Those words echo his mind

Razor in hand he lays next to her cold body and says

I love you

Slits his wrists and holds her hand

Written in blood on the floor

Suicide love

Sunshine Girl
May 26th, 2009, 10:50 PM
very emotional, and very meaningful
great job
(:

MysticalBurrito
May 26th, 2009, 10:51 PM
:) Thank you

kenoloor
May 26th, 2009, 10:57 PM
Wow, Karina that was amazing. Keep it up!

MysticalBurrito
May 29th, 2009, 11:43 AM
:) Thank you Bobby

Project Delta
May 31st, 2009, 10:17 AM
Very good! :) + Rep :)