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ErykaInspire.
May 25th, 2009, 06:49 AM
I've cried myself to sleep for the past three nights.. I decided to try to vent out my emotions, and it ended up turning into a poem.. v.v
If you want to understand what i'm talking about.. go here (http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/showthread.php?t=44836)

Nights spent crying, are they in vain?
Spilling your heart, yet still filled with pain.
Wishing you could have something you'll never get
stuck in the past, but no longer getting hit.
You want to let go, just to give him his way
but you love him to much, and don't know what to say
He lets you down easy, so you can still be friends
but when love dies, everything ends
you've pushed yourself to such and extent
you don't know where half your life went

Nights spent crying, are they in vain?
a life with him you want to maintain.
Maybe your not enough, just a broken down soul
Meant to be broken, a half, never a whole.
Every breath that you take
feels like a big mistake
you're losing your grip
and about to slip
he wants you to let go
night's spent in vain? At this rate we'll never know..

TigerLily
May 25th, 2009, 06:57 AM
That's a nice poem... but I'm so so sorry about the circumstances behind it... :(
If you ever feel like talking, feel free to pm me or something :)
:hug:

ErykaInspire.
May 25th, 2009, 07:01 AM
ty, hun.. I appreciate it

Underground_Network
May 25th, 2009, 07:15 AM
Though I already told you this, I really like this poem Eryka. :)

Oftentimes poetry is all about raw emotion, and there's a lot of that in there, and that makes this a very powerful and touching piece. ^_^

TigerLily
May 25th, 2009, 07:51 AM
ty, hun.. I appreciate it

You're quite welcome Eryka :)