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BeautifulSilence
May 24th, 2009, 06:23 PM
From the very first day of speaking
Until when, I am not sure
I’ve carried the thought for sixty nights
But now how many more?

I am walking in the forest
There’s a clearing where you stand
You smile sweetly at me
Before you take my hand

You pull me in so closely
And hold me very tight
I am caught in this moment
I am lost in this night

Embraced with your touch
Enticed by your feel
Excited in your passion
Forgetting it’s not real

I am rapt in your arms
And you remain in mine
We both face toward the sky
Our stars begin to shine

We then drift into day
Because the sun must rise
I have to lose my dream
I must open my eyes

I come back to real life
Another day I’m left to think
For now it will not be long
Until into your hold I’ll sink

I know that it will not work
I know that it cannot be
But within my hope, within my night
You can belong to me

nick
May 24th, 2009, 06:33 PM
I love this, with much jealousy and wishful thinking.

N.

TigerLily
May 24th, 2009, 07:00 PM
Laura, that is beautiful
I love it ^_^

BuryYourFlame
May 25th, 2009, 04:05 AM
wow, just amazing laua, nice work ^_^