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SlightlySane
May 23rd, 2009, 09:15 PM
Suddenly I see you clearly
you are more beautiful than before
it's like the rain has stopped
and you aren't a blur anymore

I thought we were just friends
but the bonds are so strong
and without you I'd be stranded
stranded...
alone...

I can't help but let my heart beat
it has taken control
my rhythm is yours
and my breaths are uneven

And I can see
better now
like never before
You are love

ErykaInspire.
May 24th, 2009, 08:34 AM
wow.. this is beautiful.
I love it <3

TigerLily
May 24th, 2009, 08:59 AM
beautiful poem :)

Zazu
May 24th, 2009, 11:25 AM
Nice :)