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ErykaInspire.
May 23rd, 2009, 06:54 PM
|I know the count is off... but i don't care.. I wrote this in 10-15 minutes so give me a break... </3|

Every breath that I take
is like a stake through my heart
I'm in so much pain
where do I start?

The last time I said
those three words to you
my life has gone gray
with a colorless hue

You didn't reply
but pushed me away
you wouldn't explain
you had nothing to say

What did I do
to make you flee?
did I do something wrong?
or do you just not love me?

I gave you my heart
and trusted you more
than I have my whole life
and you left me sore

I'll never move on
i'll sit right here
in the back of your heart
until your mind is clear

Hours have been spent
crying in the dark
praying my love
will give you a spark

The faintest of light
that'll help you see
that I love you
and that's how it will be

Until the day that I die
my love will never fail
even if yours
is forever stale

My one true love,
can you open your eyes?
Just one last look
and try to realize..

That I love you
Always and forever
I meant what I said
and that's my endeavor

I have to do it
not my choice but my fate
even if the consquences
come a little to late..

TigerLily
May 23rd, 2009, 07:00 PM
That is... just beautiful Eryka... I love this

ErykaInspire.
May 23rd, 2009, 07:01 PM
Thank you v.v;

TigerLily
May 23rd, 2009, 07:02 PM
You're quite welcome :)

Music Lover
June 6th, 2009, 02:15 PM
Powerful, I nearly cried...

I like it, another piece of good poetry a marvel to read.

abhishekrd
June 6th, 2009, 03:15 PM
simple yet elaborate work

Misty.
November 28th, 2009, 01:03 AM
its just such a beautiful poem..!!!

ErykaInspire.
November 28th, 2009, 12:22 PM
Thank you, hun.(: