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Toasty
May 22nd, 2009, 12:57 AM
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BuryYourFlame
May 22nd, 2009, 08:17 AM
pretty good, although something seems a bit off with the rhythm, and the last stanza confuzzled me...
DaretoFallup
May 22nd, 2009, 08:57 AM
Pretty....interesting last stanza confused me as well..
STAYING_STRONG4HIM
May 22nd, 2009, 10:02 AM
I loved the beginning of it.
MysticalBurrito
May 22nd, 2009, 10:42 AM
:) I really like it