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nick
May 18th, 2009, 01:01 PM
My thoughts they are not mine,
how did this come to be?
Control was lost,
and so I too was lost,
out of control.

My heart it is not mine
to give or to withhold.
My thoughts should rule my heart,
but who will rule my thoughts,
out of control.

Come pull yourself together
control your thoughts
and let your thoughts
direct your heart.
Regain control.

My thoughts will soon be mine,
this must soon come to be.
My mind regained
no longer lost,
under control.

TigerLily
May 18th, 2009, 01:03 PM
I like it nick, I'm impressed.. you really do write some good poems, y'know ^_^

nick
May 18th, 2009, 01:07 PM
Gee thanks. I'm finding it strangely theraputic.

TigerLily
May 18th, 2009, 01:14 PM
You're welcome :)
And yeh, I find writing can be therapeutic too... for me, esp when its to do with negative emotions, and you can feel like you're turning it into something more positive :)

ErykaInspire.
May 19th, 2009, 07:15 PM
I love it :D

YourFriend
June 23rd, 2009, 08:02 AM
nice!

Zazu
June 23rd, 2009, 02:27 PM
Disregard post.