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ErykaInspire.
May 16th, 2009, 09:44 AM
Great things never last
because of memories from the past.
Memories that end your days in tears
but somehow someway Ill conqure my fears.
Friends that one day made me feel so tall
are now pushing me back against the wall.
They tell me things to make my spirits high
Then do things that make me want to die.
Hold your breath and hold it tight
wish upon a star with all your might.
Some are good some are bad
some make you happy, others sad.
Memories make up the real YOU
they either hold you back or get you through.

EverlostPoet
May 16th, 2009, 09:46 AM
i absolutely love it, keep it up

ErykaInspire.
May 16th, 2009, 10:01 AM
Thank you, Jake(:

Sapphire
May 17th, 2009, 03:34 PM
I really like this one. It contains such a lovely message! :)

TigerLily
May 17th, 2009, 04:07 PM
Beautiful poem...
Only.. sigh... I wish I could forget a lot of my memories, I really do...

Paladino
May 17th, 2009, 04:17 PM
lovely poem

ErykaInspire.
May 17th, 2009, 04:26 PM
Thank all of you :D

1_21Guns
May 21st, 2009, 03:00 PM
I really like this, and find it easy to relate too. You have quite a talent (:

ErykaInspire.
May 21st, 2009, 03:04 PM
Thank you very much :D <3

STAYING_STRONG4HIM
May 22nd, 2009, 10:14 AM
i really liked this one too...I liked the very last line the best..