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ErykaInspire.
May 16th, 2009, 09:31 AM
Im sorry if I broke your heart
but you broke me
Im sorry for not giving in
just let me be
Im sorry for telling you the truth
next time i'll lie
Im sorry for loving you
I just thought id try
Im sorry for the smiles
that I wasted on you
Im sorry for the times
I didnt know what to do
Im sorry for everything
that ive ever done
Im sorry for leaving you
my heart has finally won.

TigerLily
May 17th, 2009, 08:45 AM
I love it Eryka :)
Seriously, this is awesome :)

ErykaInspire.
May 17th, 2009, 08:47 AM
Thank you, Rachel :D <3

TigerLily
May 17th, 2009, 08:54 AM
You're welcome :)

Sapphire
May 17th, 2009, 03:38 PM
Ooh, I love this!

Am I right in thinking that you've actually had this published somewhere?

ErykaInspire.
May 17th, 2009, 03:48 PM
Yes ma'am(:
and it's currently entered (and in the finals round) of a $2,000 contest :D

TigerLily
May 17th, 2009, 03:59 PM
^^ Ooh, good luck Eryka! :D

Sapphire
May 17th, 2009, 04:01 PM
Woo! Go Eryka! Wishing you lots of luck!