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MysticalBurrito
May 13th, 2009, 05:31 PM
Don’t look at me and cry you know that I can’t stay here
I’m sorry but I have lost the battle I am laying here in a pool of my own blood
But not alive I am in peace finally I wish that I had not done it

Please don’t cry I am sorry I said all that stuff
It was just because my emotions where out of whack wishing I could get those three words out

Please stop crying baby I wish you hadn’t found me in the mess I am in

Please stop crying baby you knew what I wanted to tell you

Please baby I love you is written in blood on the walls

Please baby don’t do it

Please stay here with me during my last moments my last breaths are for you
don’t do that
I want to know you will be alright
Put that bottle down
If only you would away as I die

My lasts breaths hurt so bad please do something I’m in so much pain

My last sight is of you picking up the gun

ErykaInspire.
May 16th, 2009, 05:41 PM
Omg, you're writing is intensely captivating

MysticalBurrito
May 16th, 2009, 05:42 PM
Wow again thank you
I didnt think it was that good

ErykaInspire.
May 16th, 2009, 05:47 PM
Everyone has their perspectives, and everyone has a saying.
You're saying that, and I view it as captivating(: lol

MysticalBurrito
May 16th, 2009, 05:48 PM
=] Thank you again you just made my day :)

ErykaInspire.
May 16th, 2009, 05:49 PM
Awh, anytime :D
and I'm glad ^_^