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Underground_Network
May 11th, 2009, 05:41 PM
This is straight from the heart,
I swear its tearing me apart;
I think that I’m in love,
But I don’t know where to start.

The distance between us
The lines in permanent ink,
They make me wonder
If our love is distinct.

They make me wonder
If our love is possible
They make me wonder
If this is even love at all.

You see I think I need you
Because when you’re around
I smile, its nice to see you,
But when you’re gone I hit the ground.

I hit send and you don’t reply,
A tear drips slowly, out of my eye,
I hit send and you don’t reply,
I swear I nearly want to suicide.

My head keeps spinning
And I don’t know why,
My head keeps spinning
And I want to die.

But maybe if I’m patient
I will hear from you,
You’ll whisper sweet nothings
And I’ll feel so good…

But maybe you will wait
Until the next day,
But maybe if you wait
It will be too late…

You see when you’re here
I shine like a star,
But when you’re away
I’m a wreck, a crashed car.

The windshield smashed in
The glass embedded in my arms
I can’t move or speak, I swear I'm near dead
I lay here, just losing my head!

I think its going to explode
I think that I really need you
I think maybe I should let go,
But if I do, but if I do…?

You’ll be happier? (Oh will you?)
I’ll be melancholy (Will you too?)
I’ll be dead inside (Oh, its true)
And sooner than later my whole will too… (My whole will too, my whole will too)

So I guess to summarize my words to you,
I think that I love you (oh do you love me too?)
But I think that to love you I must leave you,
And the only way to do that is to hang from this noose… (Hang from this noose, hang from this noose...)

MysticalBurrito
May 11th, 2009, 05:54 PM
Wow
Adam thats awesome

Underground_Network
May 11th, 2009, 05:55 PM
Inspired by Alright by Pilot Speed as well as a mixture of emotions that are overwhelming me right now...

I don't know if this song reflects anything about me right now.. But it might... The road to self-discovery is a road unpaved and unfinished... I will tell you that...

Aneklusmos
May 11th, 2009, 06:16 PM
thats really powerful. sorry if this has been asked before but does it have music to go with it?

Underground_Network
May 11th, 2009, 06:18 PM
No, sadly I don't write music.

I haven't written any type of music in over three years.

Aneklusmos
May 11th, 2009, 06:24 PM
mind if i try? i promise i wont share if its horrible. i can never get lyrics for myself to write music to

Underground_Network
May 11th, 2009, 07:29 PM
You can try if you'd like. ;)

But I haven't studied music in two years, so I wouldn't really have a clue how well your music would work with my lyrics. ;)

Aneklusmos
May 11th, 2009, 08:01 PM
Well I'll see what I can do. thanks!

AllThatIsLeft
May 11th, 2009, 09:31 PM
Adam Adam. THat was INSANELY great.

For a moment i thought you were talking about yourself though.

ErykaInspire.
May 16th, 2009, 06:12 PM
I really like it.. seeing how i'm kind of going through something similar, this caught my attention.