Log in

View Full Version : Just Fine


TigerLily
May 10th, 2009, 02:15 PM
Because I'm feeling creative today ^_^

Just Fine

She’s breaking.
She’s crying.
She’s faking.
She’s lying.
She’s losing her mind.
She’s dying inside.
She’s failing.
She’s hurting.
This damn plan
Ain’t working.

She stands alone,
She can’t take it anymore,
She picks up the phone,
And falls to the floor.
The end of the day,
On the end of the line:
“You’re sure you’re ok?” --

One tear.
One lie.
One fear.
Oh why
Does
It
Always
Have
To
Be
Me?

The end of the day,
On the end of the line:
“You’re sure you’re ok?”
Deep breath… “I’m fine”

Zazu
May 10th, 2009, 02:43 PM
Awesome, they'd make realllyyy good song lyrics imo :)

TigerLily
May 10th, 2009, 02:50 PM
^^ Thankyou, I've never thought bout song writing before (I suck at melodies :P) but that would be a pretty cool idea ^_^

nick
May 10th, 2009, 02:54 PM
I don't think I can do poetry, heres my new one word per line poem just to prove it, its called Friends:-

Friends
where?
there
where?
here
when?
always
why?
because
remember?
what?
nothing.
Oh
remember?
when?
whenever.



<3 nick

TigerLily
May 10th, 2009, 02:57 PM
^ Awesome nick :)

Zazu
May 10th, 2009, 03:03 PM
I don't think I can do poetry, heres my new one word per line poem just to prove it, its called Friends:-

Friends
where?
there
where?
here
when?
always
why?
because
remember?
what?
nothing.
Oh
remember?
when?
whenever.



<3 nick

Simple but good nick :)