"Alone" & "Night With Myself"

[EverlostPoet]

Alone

Alone with you, alone with me
You took my air, I can’t breathe
Your all I see, let us be
I’m the door, you’re the key

Alone with you, alone with me
I don’t know, I can’t breathe
You tore my heart, for all to see
Yet you still have the key

You locked my door
And threw away my key
But, my heart loves forevermore
What don’t you see in me?

I shall stand and wait my angel
Will you be mine?
You lock my door, Cold like a jail cell
I will even wait in line.

Alone with you, alone with me
What can I do, I can’t see
I love you too, but do you love me?
What have a done to you, I can’t breathe




Night With Myself

Night with Myself,
I keep running with stealth
Finding myself without wealth
So Depressed
Always need a rest
Cause I'm always running from...
Myself.
Never had a mom
Never had a dad
Makes me so sad
The longest Night
I'm losing my sight
My time is tight
Will i ever have time...
...for Myself?
Trapped like a mime
No time to think
I must take action now
Not letting myself sink
Gonna let go...But How?
I'm spending the night...
With Myself.






Random

If my Heart could be walked,
you would walk a wasteland of pain.
No one would have talked,
My Love has been Slain.

I'm left with a beat less Heart,
Why'd you lie?
It's left me in pain,
Here i Die.

Let this be the note,
that you never forget.
they lay the death coat.

No more birthday gifts,
just flowers at the grave.
as my coffin lifts...
Can i be Saved?




thats 3 tada >.>

[ErykaInspire.]

Wow. You ARE a really good poet :D
The syllable count is a little off, but they're great nonetheless.
I support you all the way(:
+Rep

[EverlostPoet]

Wow. You ARE a really good poet :D
The syllable count is a little off, but they're great nonetheless.
I support you all the way(:
+Rep

Thanx, most of them are old i dont type my newest ones i get lazy xD

[TigerLily]

Great poems Jake
(looks like sooner than later is a lot sooner than I thought :P)

[EverlostPoet]

Great poems Jake
(looks like sooner than later is a lot sooner than I thought :P)

lol these are like 4-7 monthes old xD
should see my style now.

[ErykaInspire.]

then friggen post the new style, dammit! lol (jkjk) :p

[EverlostPoet]

to much work to post xD i might make up one real quick

[ErykaInspire.]

Grrrr, lol.

Post your poems
or i'll be sad
I might go cry
and feel so bad

I want to read
what you have done
I want to see
what you've become

Your writing is great
and full of emotion
It captures my heart
and causes commotion

If I could just
get one little peek
and what your pen
has freshly leaked

I'd be so happy
and read it alot
because your poetry
is what mine is not.


HAH, oooh what now?
XD
jkjk. I have NO idea. lmao.

[EverlostPoet]

wow... just wow, Eryka xD hmmm i don't have any good topics right now to write about and im sick of Love Poems right now it seems like thats all i write. :/

[ErykaInspire.]

Just write about everything...
Write about the world through your eyes, what you think of life, just.. whatever comes to mind.
I can only write heartbroken/abuse poetry.. That's what all my good poems are, anyways. lol.

[EverlostPoet]

hmmm ill start one soon i need motivation @[email protected]

[ErykaInspire.]

hmmm..
Saving an abused child?

[EverlostPoet]

eh...idki mean like other Motivational poetry >.<

[ErykaInspire.]

lol. uhmm..
www.student.com
You have to register but there's thousands of teens that post their poetry on there.

[Origami]

JAKE!
Again I say "proseph broseph"
So let's get to work on the duo. ;)

[EverlostPoet]

lol ok Josh

[ErykaInspire.]

lol, proseph broseph?

[EverlostPoet]

that is what he calls meh xD

[ErykaInspire.]

lol, he's a goober.