Her Portrait in Blood [Old Poem]

[Origami]

She laughed with her friends,
And he cried all alone.
She was loved by everyone,
And he was on his own.

If you're reading this,
Then by now he's let go of this life.
Seperated from the one who had never loved him,
Seperated forever by a knife.

As she slept soundly,
He cried his last tears.
As she awoke,
He had let go of the pain he had felt for years.

His soul had long been gone
As she arrived at school that day.
When they all said that he was gone,
She replied with a laugh, "There's no way."

Then as the day progressed on,
She realized that the suicide was true.
It didn't affect her much until they said,
"He died becuase of you."

"He slit his wrist late last night,
Let the blood poor onto the floor,
And formed your portrait in blood
With the message, I'll love you forever more."

[MysticalBurrito]

I like it a lot its awesome i wish I could write something like that

[Origami]

That's from 8th grade?
My poems now come few and in between and have odd meaningsa now.

"My Origami Crown" was written yesterday, it's nothing relevant to how I feel or my life in general. xD

[Sunshine Girl]

wow this is amazing.
:)

[AllThatIsLeft]

That is truly beautiful. I cant write poems like that.

[ErykaInspire.]

I fell in love with this poem the first time I read it (however long ago that was on myspace, lol)
And I still love it.
I might just leave you to secks with this poem :o
JK! i love you D:

[EverlostPoet]

She laughed with her friends,
And he cried all alone.
She was loved by everyone,
And he was on his own.

If you're reading this,
Then by now he's let go of this life.
Seperated from the one who had never loved him,
Seperated forever by a knife.

As she slept soundly,
He cried his last tears.
As she awoke,
He had let go of the pain he had felt for years.

His soul had long been gone
As she arrived at school that day.
When they all said that he was gone,
She replied with a laugh, "There's no way."

Then as the day progressed on,
She realized that the suicide was true.
It didn't affect her much until they said,
"He died becuase of you."

"He slit his wrist late last night,
Let the blood poor onto the floor,
And formed your portrait in blood
With the message, I'll love you forever more."

nice man i remember dat one like a year ago i read it. xD

btw..WE STILL NEED A TOPIC FOR OUR DUO POEM!!