Zero Beat
April 7th, 2009, 07:13 PM
ok so i was writing during class, lots of spelling problems and gramma i know... just wanna know if anyone thinks if i got it better if it would be a good storie: here it is:
The wind helped me open the doors, giving the two door entry I was hoping for. I was one of them people how liked to have a mood to everything, and I had just set in the best mood of all. I started down the hall way, with even steps like always. My walk always seemed a run to everyone, were for me I was walking, I slowed my walking so people in the rooms could watch me walk past. It had been a little while since id been here, I always wanted to come back to a school I had left just to leave them jumpy again and now was my chance. I just so happened to pass my old year eight class, I smiled and waved. They looked at me stunned, as if I had died and came back. I followed the faces from table to table as they watched at me, this was my chance I decided. I looked down at my black t-shirt and gray jeans, and looked at the tip of my hair. Everyone part of me was different, I was a new person. With a quick twist I was in the school uniform, some days I wonder how I do it, others I don’t. I quickly looked at the class books before anyone from the other classes came out of their rooms, I thought of the books on the floor. With another quick whoosh I picked them up and pulled the door across, it was a science class with Miss Hendy as the teacher, she was my year eight science teacher and a nice one too. It was quite in the room, you could hear the gas running through the pipes. I walked at my usual pase to a empty chair and sat down. No one had looked away or moved any part of their body but their head, it was fun. What I’m sure felt like an hour for them passed, to me it was a minute. The bell rang; I got up from my chair and walked out. I walked in the middle of the hall way just to be a pain, but no one bumped into me or pushed me out of their way. When I went here id be the first out of class and the first in, id have all my books ready for the next class, today I couldn’t care less. I walked fast to where I once “hung” out at the school library, it was a bright sunny day there wasn’t a cloud to be seen; the sun was high and bright. It wasn’t helping the mood, I looked up at the blue sky, I started to shack my head; clouds started to form and thunder rolled in, the rain began to fall. I walked to the library; the same old people were there anyone would think they lived there. I walked and stood where I stood when I was “one of them”, it didn’t even take them a second to see I was there. “Jack!” I heard from across me, I slowly turned my head to see who said something. I knew who is it but I had to “act” like I didn’t, got to keep a little cover. Sitting on the pavement in the rain was Josh; josh was a friend of mine. An overly tall person, who gave out a lot of hugs, but he didn’t get up he just sat there. Everything seemed a little run down then it once was, I straighter up and looked around the rest of the school yard. Everyone was quite and just sat in the rain. It wasn’t going how I planed, I look at the clouds. They started to dissolve and the rain stopped, no one looked up to wonder why the rain just went away. There was something new, a feeling came across me. A feeling of dread, I never feel dread ill feel sadness, and happiness and all between. This made me shiver, the feeling of feeling something I know I shouldn’t feel it was scaring me. The bell rang; everyone got up and started to walk to class. Then I figured it out, no wonder no one ran into me, they were following they were all drone like. I stayed where I was, just to see if any of them noticed. They didn’t. time to stop this, I thought to myself. I ran over to the front of the line, they hadn’t taken even half a step before I got in front of them, I turned to the door and spread my arms out and clapped them, you could hear every door in the door close. I turned around again, at human speed, they looked at me as if I was a rock in the way and they didn’t know what to do. I stepped aside, they started walking to the door, they didn’t stop they just kept pushing at the door. Soon everyone in the line was on top of each other pushing at the door, I got worried they didn’t stop. Then I smelt it, blood. I places my hands together and pulled them apart, the doors opened. They just got up and walked to class, I tried to find the person bleeding, it was like a thick sweet smell. I stood still, someone was be hide me, I span around and just in time ducked. A guy in a silver rod stood holding a weapon of some kind, he takes another swing. I flipped, landing be hide him, I tried to take his weapon it looked like a sword, but he moved faster then me. The school yard was empty; so I ran to the other side to to and get a look at him. As soon as I moved he followed, I jumped onto the roof leaving a dint. He jumped; as he landed a shock wave sped out. I saw it hit me before it did, but I wasn’t fast enough, it hit me sending me flying. I crushed through some trees and landed on my back, the sun was in my eyes and I couldn’t see anything. Stupid sun, I thought, I jumped into the sky, doing the same thing as before I made it rain. I stayed in the safety of the clouds, I saw him looking for me. I clapped my hand and let a lightning bolt right at him, he looked up at me. His eyes were purple, they were felled with sadness, I knew I wasn’t meant to hurt him. I fell from the clouds, landing on two feet. He looked at me and smiled, he raised his sword. “Who are you?” I asked him. He had a look of shock on his face. As he went to throw it, I jumped, flipped, and landed be hide him, grapping his arms. He flicked a look over his shoulder, as he went to flip me over I asked again. Using my powers, “Who are you?” I could hear it in my head the sound of my voice was like a wine, it flowed out, with grand flavor. He stood, I could just hear what he was saying, “I am, Zavon. And im here to…” I cut him off, still using my powers, “Why are you here? Why are you trying to hurt me?” I could tell he was fighting my powers, “I, I am… am… here, because…” he flinched. Letting go of his arms, I had just enough time to side step the man be hide me. I started to run, run faster then I ever had before, I ran in circus around them, the rain came down heaver, as I ran the rain started to form around the two people. I stopped, “Frez” I said, the water slowed then stopped. Ice formed over and in the water, I watch through the ice at the two people. Then it hit me, I hit the ice. I ran to the guy and hit him, he went flying into the ice wall. “Grab my hand!” I yelled at Zavon, he grabbed my hand, it was cold yet the blood running was hot. Without a second thought I flipped Zavon on my back and ran out of the ice room. Running at speeds I didn’t know I could, I made it half way to queens land before I stopped. Then I smelled it again, that sweet smell, I turned and saw a pool of blood form on Zavon’s chest, “What happened?” I asked, “nothing, don’t worrie” he said, he tried too get up but didn’t make it, I got there before he hit the ground holding him up I started to pull his robe off, under it was a t-shirt. A green t-shirt, and he had jeans on too. I tossed the robe onto a near by rock, I ran my finger down his t-shirt, I could feel his body, his chest, abs, I pulled my finger away and the t-shirt fell into two pieces. I looked at the hole on his left side, “what happened, tell me!” I was yelling at him as if he was a deaf man, “He, he…” he coughed, I looked at it again. Black stuff had started to come out, I knew what that meant. Govena, a sickness that only kills our kinds, only every few of use ever see it without dieing. “Come on, I know were I can take you” I picked him up this time giving him time to get a little relaxed, I ran home. It took around 30 minutes not my best time, I ran to school. Come on come on, I thought to me, I got to school. Everyone was happy; people were playing footy and chatting about what they did on the weekend. “You know I almost started controlling people at the bus stop? Yet I was so bored waiting for it, I just through maybe I could get someone to ring a taxi. But I stopped myself” the girls always go on about how they did this and how they almost did that, but I wasn’t in the mood to be picky. Ran at the doors, I hadn’t done this with a person on me. See the thing is there are no doors, only we could get in. I ran at the door, closing my eyes I passed through. I quickly looked back to see if Zavon was still there, he was. I ran down the hall way “Miss Becoms!!” I yelled out, Miss Becoms was the school nurse she knew everything about all sicknesses, which was her “gift”. Her hair was ginger today; she turned and waited for me to run up. She didn’t have to wait long, “He was hurt, I think the guy who hurt him had Govena” I explained to her as she looked at him, “Ok, follow me” she said, in a poof of pink smoke she was gone, she always did that. I ran down some more rooms and stopped out the front of a white one, I shoved the door down as I entered. “What is going to happen to him?” I felt a feeling for him; I hadn’t felt for anyone before. I liked him, then I saw his face for the first time, for some reason I hadn’t even looked at his face before now.
The wind helped me open the doors, giving the two door entry I was hoping for. I was one of them people how liked to have a mood to everything, and I had just set in the best mood of all. I started down the hall way, with even steps like always. My walk always seemed a run to everyone, were for me I was walking, I slowed my walking so people in the rooms could watch me walk past. It had been a little while since id been here, I always wanted to come back to a school I had left just to leave them jumpy again and now was my chance. I just so happened to pass my old year eight class, I smiled and waved. They looked at me stunned, as if I had died and came back. I followed the faces from table to table as they watched at me, this was my chance I decided. I looked down at my black t-shirt and gray jeans, and looked at the tip of my hair. Everyone part of me was different, I was a new person. With a quick twist I was in the school uniform, some days I wonder how I do it, others I don’t. I quickly looked at the class books before anyone from the other classes came out of their rooms, I thought of the books on the floor. With another quick whoosh I picked them up and pulled the door across, it was a science class with Miss Hendy as the teacher, she was my year eight science teacher and a nice one too. It was quite in the room, you could hear the gas running through the pipes. I walked at my usual pase to a empty chair and sat down. No one had looked away or moved any part of their body but their head, it was fun. What I’m sure felt like an hour for them passed, to me it was a minute. The bell rang; I got up from my chair and walked out. I walked in the middle of the hall way just to be a pain, but no one bumped into me or pushed me out of their way. When I went here id be the first out of class and the first in, id have all my books ready for the next class, today I couldn’t care less. I walked fast to where I once “hung” out at the school library, it was a bright sunny day there wasn’t a cloud to be seen; the sun was high and bright. It wasn’t helping the mood, I looked up at the blue sky, I started to shack my head; clouds started to form and thunder rolled in, the rain began to fall. I walked to the library; the same old people were there anyone would think they lived there. I walked and stood where I stood when I was “one of them”, it didn’t even take them a second to see I was there. “Jack!” I heard from across me, I slowly turned my head to see who said something. I knew who is it but I had to “act” like I didn’t, got to keep a little cover. Sitting on the pavement in the rain was Josh; josh was a friend of mine. An overly tall person, who gave out a lot of hugs, but he didn’t get up he just sat there. Everything seemed a little run down then it once was, I straighter up and looked around the rest of the school yard. Everyone was quite and just sat in the rain. It wasn’t going how I planed, I look at the clouds. They started to dissolve and the rain stopped, no one looked up to wonder why the rain just went away. There was something new, a feeling came across me. A feeling of dread, I never feel dread ill feel sadness, and happiness and all between. This made me shiver, the feeling of feeling something I know I shouldn’t feel it was scaring me. The bell rang; everyone got up and started to walk to class. Then I figured it out, no wonder no one ran into me, they were following they were all drone like. I stayed where I was, just to see if any of them noticed. They didn’t. time to stop this, I thought to myself. I ran over to the front of the line, they hadn’t taken even half a step before I got in front of them, I turned to the door and spread my arms out and clapped them, you could hear every door in the door close. I turned around again, at human speed, they looked at me as if I was a rock in the way and they didn’t know what to do. I stepped aside, they started walking to the door, they didn’t stop they just kept pushing at the door. Soon everyone in the line was on top of each other pushing at the door, I got worried they didn’t stop. Then I smelt it, blood. I places my hands together and pulled them apart, the doors opened. They just got up and walked to class, I tried to find the person bleeding, it was like a thick sweet smell. I stood still, someone was be hide me, I span around and just in time ducked. A guy in a silver rod stood holding a weapon of some kind, he takes another swing. I flipped, landing be hide him, I tried to take his weapon it looked like a sword, but he moved faster then me. The school yard was empty; so I ran to the other side to to and get a look at him. As soon as I moved he followed, I jumped onto the roof leaving a dint. He jumped; as he landed a shock wave sped out. I saw it hit me before it did, but I wasn’t fast enough, it hit me sending me flying. I crushed through some trees and landed on my back, the sun was in my eyes and I couldn’t see anything. Stupid sun, I thought, I jumped into the sky, doing the same thing as before I made it rain. I stayed in the safety of the clouds, I saw him looking for me. I clapped my hand and let a lightning bolt right at him, he looked up at me. His eyes were purple, they were felled with sadness, I knew I wasn’t meant to hurt him. I fell from the clouds, landing on two feet. He looked at me and smiled, he raised his sword. “Who are you?” I asked him. He had a look of shock on his face. As he went to throw it, I jumped, flipped, and landed be hide him, grapping his arms. He flicked a look over his shoulder, as he went to flip me over I asked again. Using my powers, “Who are you?” I could hear it in my head the sound of my voice was like a wine, it flowed out, with grand flavor. He stood, I could just hear what he was saying, “I am, Zavon. And im here to…” I cut him off, still using my powers, “Why are you here? Why are you trying to hurt me?” I could tell he was fighting my powers, “I, I am… am… here, because…” he flinched. Letting go of his arms, I had just enough time to side step the man be hide me. I started to run, run faster then I ever had before, I ran in circus around them, the rain came down heaver, as I ran the rain started to form around the two people. I stopped, “Frez” I said, the water slowed then stopped. Ice formed over and in the water, I watch through the ice at the two people. Then it hit me, I hit the ice. I ran to the guy and hit him, he went flying into the ice wall. “Grab my hand!” I yelled at Zavon, he grabbed my hand, it was cold yet the blood running was hot. Without a second thought I flipped Zavon on my back and ran out of the ice room. Running at speeds I didn’t know I could, I made it half way to queens land before I stopped. Then I smelled it again, that sweet smell, I turned and saw a pool of blood form on Zavon’s chest, “What happened?” I asked, “nothing, don’t worrie” he said, he tried too get up but didn’t make it, I got there before he hit the ground holding him up I started to pull his robe off, under it was a t-shirt. A green t-shirt, and he had jeans on too. I tossed the robe onto a near by rock, I ran my finger down his t-shirt, I could feel his body, his chest, abs, I pulled my finger away and the t-shirt fell into two pieces. I looked at the hole on his left side, “what happened, tell me!” I was yelling at him as if he was a deaf man, “He, he…” he coughed, I looked at it again. Black stuff had started to come out, I knew what that meant. Govena, a sickness that only kills our kinds, only every few of use ever see it without dieing. “Come on, I know were I can take you” I picked him up this time giving him time to get a little relaxed, I ran home. It took around 30 minutes not my best time, I ran to school. Come on come on, I thought to me, I got to school. Everyone was happy; people were playing footy and chatting about what they did on the weekend. “You know I almost started controlling people at the bus stop? Yet I was so bored waiting for it, I just through maybe I could get someone to ring a taxi. But I stopped myself” the girls always go on about how they did this and how they almost did that, but I wasn’t in the mood to be picky. Ran at the doors, I hadn’t done this with a person on me. See the thing is there are no doors, only we could get in. I ran at the door, closing my eyes I passed through. I quickly looked back to see if Zavon was still there, he was. I ran down the hall way “Miss Becoms!!” I yelled out, Miss Becoms was the school nurse she knew everything about all sicknesses, which was her “gift”. Her hair was ginger today; she turned and waited for me to run up. She didn’t have to wait long, “He was hurt, I think the guy who hurt him had Govena” I explained to her as she looked at him, “Ok, follow me” she said, in a poof of pink smoke she was gone, she always did that. I ran down some more rooms and stopped out the front of a white one, I shoved the door down as I entered. “What is going to happen to him?” I felt a feeling for him; I hadn’t felt for anyone before. I liked him, then I saw his face for the first time, for some reason I hadn’t even looked at his face before now.