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Triceratops
March 21st, 2009, 03:32 PM
So, I was watching this movie the other night with my friend and I was bored so I decided to write a poem which kinda relates to it....

Bind his ankles to the chilled steel
Blind the cunt in bloodied chains
Decide your weapon, dear
Excruciate his repentant soul.

Sense his flesh
Stone cold with fear and trepidation
Sly cackles wandering forth thy lips
As the blade sweeps gracefully onto his chest.

Catapult the scythe and slice through inside
Blood pouring, guts drenching
Enforce his entrails to crash upon the ground
As he weeps for mercy

His butchered figure still squirming, the work is not complete
Gauge his sickened eyes with all thy might
Rotting fluid oozes from within
The torturer beholds the sounds of the victims howls.

The hapless being continues to suffer
Withdraw a hammerblow to the head
A sinister way to lose ones life
There is no such escaping this darkened pernicious chamber.

Cloud
March 21st, 2009, 03:37 PM
thats extremely good you are an extremely talented writer



btw what film was it you were watching?

Tiberius
March 21st, 2009, 03:40 PM
That's ummm...a bit disturbing and yet sounds like something that would come out of my head at times...

OnlyByTheNight.
April 4th, 2009, 06:36 PM
Very disturbing but I still wanted to read it all... Your a very good writter! And also what film was it?!