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Underground_Network
March 21st, 2009, 02:08 PM
The fire is lit
By your fiery hazel eyes;
The glow so bright, the aura so strong
I cannot resist.

You draw me in;
I cannot resist you.
They call this feeling "love,"
I call it the "state of mass confusion."

I do not know what to say,
Whether to mention those
Beautiful bedroom eyes,
Or your luscious pink lips...

Maybe I should comment
On your perfectly straightened,
Perfectly flowing,
Perfectly perfect brown hair.

Maybe I should just say hello,
And introduce myself,
Just plain old simple me,
Or maybe I should do something extravagant.

Something over the top
That will cause you to lift your head
And look up at me with one of your
Perfectly beautiful smiles.

Maybe then we will discover
That we are meant to be,
Or maybe in that moment,
I will discover what is not meant to be.

Oh, maybe your beauty is too much for me,
Maybe I am undeserving,
Maybe no one deserves you;
Some say that no one deserves perfection.

But I refuse to believe that,
Someone deserves you,
And you deserve someone too.
Love is so necessary in the world today...

Your perfectly tanned body
Is screaming out for somebody to hold it
For somebody to keep it warm
And comfort it when things go awry.

I do not know if the fire in your eyes
Burns for me or for someone else,
But whoever it burns for,
I hope it melts their heart (as it has already melted mine).



Meh, relatively crappy, but I wrote it on the spot, and I'm just trying to write a poem for my crush that I would actually be willing to give to her (this one is probably a no-no). 0.o

Meh... 0.o

Kaleidoscope Eyes
March 21st, 2009, 02:35 PM
Awwh. Very nice, written for a very lucky girl. I agree that you might not want to give this one to her, the word "love" might scare her a little. But it really is beautiful. I always love reading your work.

TigerLily
March 21st, 2009, 02:41 PM
Aww, sweet poem :D... I'm sure you're crush would love to get this, though I've got to agree with Kaleidoscope Eyes the whole L-word could be kinda creepy at first.
Very nice poem :D