By a friend...

[BuryYourFlame]

ok...just making sure again...this was NOT written by me, it was written by a friend of mine.

fuck your little smile
and your teasing little eyes
fuck your tender touches
and fuck your little lies
fuck everything about you
everything that drew me in
the reason why im drowning
the reason i cant swim
you said you\'d fucking be there
but you werent when i needed you most
fuck your petty excuses
to me youre just a ghost
a spirit that wont leave me
or give me fucking peace
all i want is your arms around me
and for that im losing sleep
you just keep denying me
of the love i know is mine
im desperate cuz i need you
where do i draw the line?
i love you but i hate you
and for that i say fuck this
refusing me everything ive given
ignoring my only wish...

now...normally i dont really endorse swearing, but i think that the swearing is what completes this poem.

[MacMilker]

thats a happy poem.....

[BuryYourFlame]

lol, yeh...i get ur point...i guess i just liked it cause that's the mood im in atm...

[MysticalBurrito]

Thats a nice poem...besides the cussing

[BuryYourFlame]

agreed, i still stand by what i said about the swearing making the poem what it is, but i think that if a suitable substitute was found, i would be ecstatic.

[Halibut]

wow that is tragicly beautiful ..like wow i agree with the sweraing point..you can really feel her emotion

[BuryYourFlame]

you can really feel her emotion

hehe, lol, he wont like being called a girl :P

it was actually a guy friend who wrote it

[devilishangel]

lol...ya i thought it was a guy frnd though :P
nyways..a nyc poem...cuz u get to kno d real meaning...n i duno..i feel if cursing hadnt been used..it wont b dat good :( it jst kinda u kno...shows d real essense

[AllThatIsLeft]

oh i'm loving that. i've felt liek that too many times... and the swearing just completes it =]]

[devilishangel]

surely it doz :)

[BuryYourFlame]

yeh...i never thought of the guy that wrote this as the sorta guy who would write poetry...but eh...

[DarkWingedAngel]

i like it
sorta how im feeling right now too
and i totally agree
the swearing does complete it

[foreverjd14]

i love this poem
its sad
but really good

[ErykaInspire.]

It's amazing. The emotion is definitely powerful.