Perseus
February 19th, 2009, 06:53 PM
I would like people's feedback on this beause I had to write this for school.
The topic:Why do you think the community Jonas lived in was formed? What would be some of the reasons people would choose to lvie in such a communiy?
It is based off of The Giver by Lois Lowry(?)
To eliminate chaos, but chaos will always happen. They thought they could create a new realm for the people that shall come after them. They thought if they diminshed the population to something they could control, simply to play God.They thought if they were to create a perfect community, they could control the outside phenomenon, so it people cold live safely. They thought if no knowledge of is exists in their community sothat people wouldn't go crazy for it. But they couldn't leave behind every memory, so they chose a successor.
Exhilarating, probally what some people would some people would think when they heeard such a community existed. People who implore for help is probally why people would leave cities, to get away from it all and have no skeptical feelings. To be placid from other neuences(?) like war and famine. They probally thought since there is not a lot of conveyance by cars, they woukd be kess harmfuk enissions ro rheir life styles. no mroe conspicuos things like color to determine or chooe the wrong things, but were they ever so wrong...
Can someone please tell what the definition of phenomenon because I think I have the wrong one. Thanks.
The topic:Why do you think the community Jonas lived in was formed? What would be some of the reasons people would choose to lvie in such a communiy?
It is based off of The Giver by Lois Lowry(?)
To eliminate chaos, but chaos will always happen. They thought they could create a new realm for the people that shall come after them. They thought if they diminshed the population to something they could control, simply to play God.They thought if they were to create a perfect community, they could control the outside phenomenon, so it people cold live safely. They thought if no knowledge of is exists in their community sothat people wouldn't go crazy for it. But they couldn't leave behind every memory, so they chose a successor.
Exhilarating, probally what some people would some people would think when they heeard such a community existed. People who implore for help is probally why people would leave cities, to get away from it all and have no skeptical feelings. To be placid from other neuences(?) like war and famine. They probally thought since there is not a lot of conveyance by cars, they woukd be kess harmfuk enissions ro rheir life styles. no mroe conspicuos things like color to determine or chooe the wrong things, but were they ever so wrong...
Can someone please tell what the definition of phenomenon because I think I have the wrong one. Thanks.