What Do You Think Of My Story?

[Stark]

"In a little swampland town, there start to be a lot of strange disappearances, and dead bodies start turning up, the person doing all these murders and kidnappings, is finally captured, and put in the biggest jail in the country, but little did the police know, he was one of the biggest mob bosses in the country, and it courses all the mobs and criminals in the country to come and get him released, and get their revenge on the police that arrested him, by doing this riots start all over the city... but the mob is not all of their worries, the murderer is a Voodoo witch doctor, and casts a spell for demonic monsters to plague the town, and then take over the world, but these monsters have a mind of their own, and form a side of their own, and the police and criminals have to work together to defeat the monsters."


What do you think? And can you please tell me how you think it should end, should the monsters win and destroy the Earth, or should humans win?