Melody in F

[Willy]

A work I've done over the weekend for school.
Meant to be in the Cultural frame.
Opinions? :)

[SingASadSong4408]

thats, like, (ah, sorry! I hate saying 'like' like that). let me rephrase. that IS AMAZING! :)

[desire]

Can't seem to put my finger over it exactly but it's just not saying anything to me other than Melody in F, I also think perhaps the background is a little too harsh.

However nevertheless, a solid piece of work.

:)