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SingASadSong4408
February 11th, 2009, 06:03 PM
I dont know if this one is any good. my friend has heard me play it and she says its her favorite of mine, but idk. I wrote this about my best guy friend (who I like) that was falling for a type of Frenemy(I hate that term, but it fits) abd I just came home and wrote it, didnt think, just wrote. this is ind of a revised version, like, a few mords are different cause I dont have the original, because that frenemy I was talking about, she gave the guy the song was about the original lyrics. but anyway, enough of my ranting, here it is:

"He Doesnt Know"

He says ‘you look beautiful’
She just smiles back at him
He winks
She bats her lashes
Up at him
He turns
And looks at me
And says ‘look at her
How did I get so lucky?’

What he doesn’t know
Is how I'm dying inside
I let a tear fall
The tears I'm trying to hide
He doesn’t know
That I'm wishing for him
On every star at night
His bright blue eyes
Are my happiest dream
And that he don’t dream of me
Makes me wanna scream
Oh that’s what he doesn’t know

He kisses her softly
I turn and look
The other way
She leans
On his shoulder
My heart falls
Its breaking apart again
Oh and he turns
And looks at me
He says ‘look at her
How did I get so lucky?’

What he doesn’t know
Is how I'm dying inside
I let a tear fall
The tears I'm trying to hide
He doesn’t know
That I'm wishing for him
On every star at night
His bright blue eyes
Are my happiest dream
And that he don’t dream of me
Makes me wanna scream
Oh that’s what he doesn’t know

And my heart
Its aching
And my love for him
Is aching
As I turn out the light
Make a wish on a star
And I wish

That he would know
That I'm dying inside
That he could see these tears
I'm trying to hide
That he could be my wish come true
That his blue eyes
Are my happiest dream
And that he loves her
Makes me wanna scream
Oh woah
I wish he would know
He would know oh


Comments would be good, Thanks!!!

SingASadSong4408 (a.k.a. Carlie)

BuryYourFlame
February 12th, 2009, 06:35 AM
good job, it would be interesting to hear the music that goes with this :D

AutumnDae
February 12th, 2009, 07:34 AM
Reminds me of a few songs, but I like it. Good job. :) I had music playing along with it in my head.