Knee Deep in Hate

[Triceratops]

Glaring forth the mirror I behold
Rotting flesh bloodshed tears
Knee deep in animosity

Perished emotions I surrender
A polluted soul is void
Knee deep in decadence

Tranquility found in confinement
Redemption buried beneath
Knee deep in dysphoria

Hatred is wisdom
Ignorance is peace
Purity is illusive
Malevolence is independece
Tribulation is strength
Freedom is power
Fully alive I have reformed to


FYI: I made this up on the spot, sorry if it's no good. Opinions would be nice :]

[Aηdy]

You made that up on the spot? I could never make anything that good if I was given 10 years to write it!

It's great, very expressive words :)

[AutumnDae]

This would probably take me about 3 hours to write. And it'd still be crappy. You're really good at writing. :)

[Cloud]

thats well cool. how did u do it on the spot?. on many occasions ive wanted to write somethnig and sat fo an hour with wordpad open and nothing being written. thats reeally good.

[Triceratops]

Haha, I know this poem is pretty doom and gloom but they're the only style of poem I can write, my "happy" poems just sound retarded.

But thanks anyways :D

[BlackenedSilver]

Wow that is really good! Amazing for on the spot! :D

Theres no way I could ever write anything like that!

[Underground_Network]

Wow, that's great Marcie. ;)

I write almost all of my work on the spot, and as my creative writing teacher complains, I never revise my work. I know none of my poems/songs/short stories are ever finished after the first draft, its just that I'm too lazy to revise them and well, when new ideas pop into my head I prefer to start anew as opposed to editing my previous piece and adding said new ideas in.

[Triceratops]

Thanks guyz :mrgreen: