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LaLa
February 9th, 2009, 03:24 PM
The Last.

Nothing lasts forever
Time must run its course
Watch it wander by
Till the glass runs out

Every step will fade
Each word will be forgotten
See the gates of heaven
Evoke the hounds of hell

Wander through the valleys
They won’t always be green
Breathe each breath, live each day
Like it was your last

Friends won’t always be there
Things won’t go your way
Savor every breath
It might just be your last

IAMWILL
February 9th, 2009, 11:55 PM
I like this poem it flows good. Good ending too.

rette_mich
February 18th, 2009, 06:57 PM
I like this a lot.
It's to the point and has specific meaning.
Maybe it's just me, but the title reeled me in.