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BuryYourFlame
January 29th, 2009, 07:25 AM
In pairs of two they start their dance,
together spinning,
altogether tansfixing,
though the beauty is long gone,
the coldness follows as their feet they glide,
they continue their dance,
hoping to outrun,
what must be their demise.

The dance is far off skew now,
stumbling blinded,
she sees the eyes across from her,
for what they really are, behind the clouds,
his eyes of stone and face too still,
hoping to outrun,
what must be their demise.

hope you like :D

Dec

pseudo_penguin
January 30th, 2009, 03:10 AM
I don't get it :/ Where are the bears?
But anyway, pffft barely decent, as if. Its awesome ^^
I want to see more of your creative side from now on, even if I have to do... that thing... to you at school xD

IAMWILL
February 3rd, 2009, 09:33 PM
Thats pretty cool. Keep it up!