ruined and dead

[MysticalBurrito]

I heard the sirens but I do not react
Down crashed my life that I had worked on for
15 years
Now I lay down in what remained of my last chance
My last hope in life
She was ruined by anger
She cried for help
But nobody heard her
I was in war with myself
I was blind with anger
I was hurt by him
I hated myself
As I lay there I saw what happen in my life
And I wondered….
Did I make a difference?

tell me what you think or just tell me it plain sucked

[Bobby]

Please don't double post.

[Dragonite]

What is it supposed to be buy what ever it is it's good I wood never b ablle to do anything like that

[MysticalBurrito]

sorry and what?