Ruiner
January 15th, 2009, 06:24 AM
Decided that what some other members were doing - having one thread for all their poetry - would be a good idea. Most of my poems are written as lyrics. They often have the verse/chorus/bridge format, and there's always rhyme and rhythm to them. Sometimes I write stories/descriptive passages or essay type things, and if they're good enough I might post them here as well.
Oh, and comments are much appreciated.
I'll start off with one of my simplest, but also one of my best.
It's called "The Escape".
I leave the light on
And I leave myself
The figure in front
Must be some one else
Anyone else
I am paralysed
The world also seems to be
From all I've analysed
From all I've seen
The good things in life
Are but a dream
I feel the sting
Familiar sensation
It's calm, comforting
A sign of desperation
Pain ridden desperation
A slight sense of guilt
Accomanies it
Destroying all I've built
Stupid bull shit
Stupid shit
Worthless bull shit
Same old shit
And it's just about to
Start and finish
Again.
Oh, and comments are much appreciated.
I'll start off with one of my simplest, but also one of my best.
It's called "The Escape".
I leave the light on
And I leave myself
The figure in front
Must be some one else
Anyone else
I am paralysed
The world also seems to be
From all I've analysed
From all I've seen
The good things in life
Are but a dream
I feel the sting
Familiar sensation
It's calm, comforting
A sign of desperation
Pain ridden desperation
A slight sense of guilt
Accomanies it
Destroying all I've built
Stupid bull shit
Stupid shit
Worthless bull shit
Same old shit
And it's just about to
Start and finish
Again.