ShatteredWings
January 14th, 2009, 06:51 PM
... I've been writing a lot lately... *shrug* this one actually has some structure to it. I was both bored and pissed off, enjoy.
Too thin Too insanely small
Too long Too marred Way too light
She sleeps, Waiting for night
For her night to come
The Girl waits in silent longing
Yes, in time it comes.
She questions and pauses
Is this really what I want?
to live, yet have died?
No, this is not worth it
The end has yet to being
No, She will not die
Yes, She will survive
Forever She will be loved
Forever and Always
1. Yes, titles come later. Almost always the last line...
2. No, I don't plan on killing myself.. so don't ask!
3. the rest of this is bold to make the italicized part look thinner. Originally I wrote it in sharpie and ballpoint pen.
4. Read "insanely" as one syllable... *edit* scratch that, there's a few that are a little weird
5. Anything constructive is appreciated :)
Too thin Too insanely small
Too long Too marred Way too light
She sleeps, Waiting for night
For her night to come
The Girl waits in silent longing
Yes, in time it comes.
She questions and pauses
Is this really what I want?
to live, yet have died?
No, this is not worth it
The end has yet to being
No, She will not die
Yes, She will survive
Forever She will be loved
Forever and Always
1. Yes, titles come later. Almost always the last line...
2. No, I don't plan on killing myself.. so don't ask!
3. the rest of this is bold to make the italicized part look thinner. Originally I wrote it in sharpie and ballpoint pen.
4. Read "insanely" as one syllable... *edit* scratch that, there's a few that are a little weird
5. Anything constructive is appreciated :)