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Dreaming Cannibal
January 10th, 2009, 11:03 PM
This poem i wrote for a class and when i was asked to read it in front of everyone i was, mostly against it but my teacher made do it.
Please understand this poem. It might lead you off in sooo many thing but try to understand it and enjoy it. ^__^

What the hand could not draw

As we lied on the silk
I could see how its red
Covered your breast
I could see how your legs
Were joyfully wrapped with it.

Your blond locks were dully
Trying to cover your lips
But, they covered the silk of your breast.

Your sweet innocent smile
Always had something that
Made me feel the breeze
Kissing my lips,
Yours were red; crimson if you may
And had a soft feeling to the touch.

The emeralds that you have by eyes
Always kept a secret,
A secret that I never knew
Curiosity killed the cat; cat.

Pleasure, of having you moan
Begging me to stop
Pleasure that after two years
I yet feel no remorse

Satisfaction of giving you
What you deserved
Disappointment.
I was just too short.
I couldn’t enjoy it for too long,
The scared expression of your doll face


Baby doll I do love you more
You thought you couldn’t satisfy me
Well now you know
You were able
But not anymore.

The red silk covered
Your breast and chin
And now you lifelessly
Lie beside me.

Burnthecity
January 10th, 2009, 11:09 PM
Well i must say you are very tallented.
theres alot going on in this poem
overall really good job
i liked it :)