Letting go

[ShatteredGlass]

When you feel like letting go
And you hope not
But you know
That you cant make it
On your own
And you think of the battles you thought
That you won then realize
You lost
And you feel ur soul is breaking
And you feel
your heart aching
And you don’t want another chance
You want to leave
You don’t wanna dance
And you fail
To realize
With the tears
Fallin from your eyes
That the ones that Really cared
The ones you needed
Were always there
And you cant
Live with what you’ve done
And you think of the battles you’ve fought
And not won
And all you want
Is to let go
And you hope not
But you know
That your aching heart
Is tearin you apart
And you know
No matter how hard you try
You wanna give up and die
You hope not but you know
That you cant make it
On your own

~Skarlyt

[Mannequin]

It's a pretty good poem, but you had way too many cliches.

[ShatteredGlass]

Cliches? Like what?

[ShatteredWings]

ignore him. I don't see any.

My only recomendation is that you don't use "u" as a word. it ruins it

[ShatteredGlass]

oops, quick typing thanks :)